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Atehequa
06-06-2011, 04:50 AM
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David Strugnell
06-06-2011, 05:58 AM
A dace is any of a number of species of small fish. The unmodified name is usually a reference to the Common Dace (Leuciscus leuciscus).
winterroom
06-06-2011, 06:03 AM
perfect form for the subject - a good stretch of poem, flowing strongly.
One or two places I'm not sure of the syntax -whether a clause goes with the previous or the subsequent phrase - due to the absence of punctuation.
But I am not sure that matters a whole lot.
One line that baffled me completely...
"That will put into play is sorely evident"
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