The Shadows

[zoolane]

The Shadows.

In depth of dark shadow which sits on the wall, waiting for momentary day which it leave it present state.
In the aloneness of be trap in the this dark world of unforgiving nature.
A mirror image of them but innocent that is loss that single glance.
The sins of them which cover the world is heavy burden which is pour into the dark shadow.
Is weighten the pure and angel like shadows on the walls.

[MystyrMystyry]

This is good good good Zoo!

You've got to find a publisher - and quick!

[zoolane]

This is good good good Zoo!

You've got to find a publisher - and quick!

Not sure publisher would agree with you MM thank you all same.

[hallaig]

A strange and intriguing rush of images, made more powerful somehow by the off-beam way you use the language. I liked this.

[MystyrMystyry]

No zoo - I really honestly believe that a GOOD publisher would. If I had the publishing nous and wherewithall I would definitely have your poems and stories on the press.

You're truly unique and have your own remarkable gift - there is only one zoolane and she's great!

[PrinceMyshkin]

I love the way you've let yourself get into these long, fluid lines.

[Jerrybaldy]

Darkness is there in the shadows of a lot of your work, zoo, it keeps me coming back.