Judas Iscariot
05-30-2011, 07:21 PM
http://www.uforadar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=4108
I thought you all might be interested to know that one of your members is posting plagiarized material on a different forum.
Letting in the Ghosts (my new piece) (http://www.uforadar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=4108)
The house at midnight hums with consonants.
Particularly the air-handler’s lay
soothes me as seasons pass the windows―
summer slowly and winter’s frozen tracks―
I bless the steadiness of ems and ars.
Falls are less unruffled, they tic-toc on
gables, like some anachronistic clock,
a quick knocking in counterpoint, as oaks
forgo acorns in incessant metronomic drops,
and blown leaves brush against the windowpanes.
When in April comes the hour between the days,
a lull with lilacs from the dead ground grows
and through the open windows lets the ghosts in,
a redolence in all the rooms, almost seen
in moonlight―hyacinth, peony and rose.
Arse has an e at the end.
""Many women who do not dress modestly lead young men astray and spread adultery in society which increases earthquakes" - Hojatoleslam Kazem Sedighi, senior Iranian Cleric" - this is true, by the way.
Far from blowing my own trumpet but please notice the musical use of assonance, consonance and alliteration.
Thanks!
Unless you're a 65 year old man who enjoys fly fishing and lives in florida, thats been copy/pasta'd from another website, done in Feb 2010.
http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?p=845055#post845055
http://www.online-literature.com/forums/member.php?u=35591 Orly?
Scroll down to the 5th post and you'll see it there, before the real writer removed it for editing.
how
Don't talk through your arse, woman. Thats what this poster had to say about the real author.
Post #9 from the first link...
So "smitten" that you'd post it here and claim it as your own? You talentless ****.
You're rumbled, just leave and don't come back.
You know what, someone ought to register over there and link them to this :lol: I'm sure they'd be rather dissappointed in some hack trying to reap the glory for someone elses work.
You've disarmed yourself from saying anything smart in this thread as soon as you called the poem 'dry and lifeless'. Don't you understand? I'm no fool, this was an experiment. I wanted to see if people on here would praise this amazing poem or whether they'd say it was crap, and in the latter case , whether that was just because Megadethly posted it. I wanted to see if there was a bias against anything I say and do.It was an experiment. The conclusoin? I was right, I'm always right.
And Bap, you talk a lot of **** and no nothing about literautre.
This must be pretty embarrassing. Suicide embarrassing i'd say
Really, stealing someone else's work and claiming them as your own is low life ****. And she has the gull to talk **** about American writer's and claim they have no longevity?
Nice investigative work, sir.
I posted this in the thread discussing the poem, but given that it hasn't been bumped since 2010, I thought it might go unseen.
I thought you all might be interested to know that one of your members is posting plagiarized material on a different forum.
Letting in the Ghosts (my new piece) (http://www.uforadar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=4108)
The house at midnight hums with consonants.
Particularly the air-handler’s lay
soothes me as seasons pass the windows―
summer slowly and winter’s frozen tracks―
I bless the steadiness of ems and ars.
Falls are less unruffled, they tic-toc on
gables, like some anachronistic clock,
a quick knocking in counterpoint, as oaks
forgo acorns in incessant metronomic drops,
and blown leaves brush against the windowpanes.
When in April comes the hour between the days,
a lull with lilacs from the dead ground grows
and through the open windows lets the ghosts in,
a redolence in all the rooms, almost seen
in moonlight―hyacinth, peony and rose.
Arse has an e at the end.
""Many women who do not dress modestly lead young men astray and spread adultery in society which increases earthquakes" - Hojatoleslam Kazem Sedighi, senior Iranian Cleric" - this is true, by the way.
Far from blowing my own trumpet but please notice the musical use of assonance, consonance and alliteration.
Thanks!
Unless you're a 65 year old man who enjoys fly fishing and lives in florida, thats been copy/pasta'd from another website, done in Feb 2010.
http://www.online-literature.com/forums/showthread.php?p=845055#post845055
http://www.online-literature.com/forums/member.php?u=35591 Orly?
Scroll down to the 5th post and you'll see it there, before the real writer removed it for editing.
how
Don't talk through your arse, woman. Thats what this poster had to say about the real author.
Post #9 from the first link...
So "smitten" that you'd post it here and claim it as your own? You talentless ****.
You're rumbled, just leave and don't come back.
You know what, someone ought to register over there and link them to this :lol: I'm sure they'd be rather dissappointed in some hack trying to reap the glory for someone elses work.
You've disarmed yourself from saying anything smart in this thread as soon as you called the poem 'dry and lifeless'. Don't you understand? I'm no fool, this was an experiment. I wanted to see if people on here would praise this amazing poem or whether they'd say it was crap, and in the latter case , whether that was just because Megadethly posted it. I wanted to see if there was a bias against anything I say and do.It was an experiment. The conclusoin? I was right, I'm always right.
And Bap, you talk a lot of **** and no nothing about literautre.
This must be pretty embarrassing. Suicide embarrassing i'd say
Really, stealing someone else's work and claiming them as your own is low life ****. And she has the gull to talk **** about American writer's and claim they have no longevity?
Nice investigative work, sir.
I posted this in the thread discussing the poem, but given that it hasn't been bumped since 2010, I thought it might go unseen.