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peter7805
05-30-2011, 12:29 AM
F**k f**k f**k

F**k the world too much

I love it destroyed by the fire and flood

To hate is to love

And it sucks the pain and the blood

To kill each other fast

Oh God is past

It is the time of the devil

And the darkness comes

I need the lust to sink in the night of dust

The fleshes walk with their souls lost

And the justice is life cost

To get the revenge from all the sins

To stab the heart with a pin

hillwalker
06-01-2011, 05:41 AM
This starts off as a rant - with some rhyme thrown in to make it appear more like a poem - but some of the lines are weak ('Oh God is past'??) and that feeble closing line completely destroys whatever anger you intended to convey.

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everyadventure
06-02-2011, 12:07 AM
This might work well as the lyrics to a heavy metal song...