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WolfLarsen
05-27-2011, 02:25 PM
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Millions of women's bellybuttons are bouncing all over the moon

YesNo
05-27-2011, 04:21 PM
I liked the alliteration on the words belly, buttons, bouncing and millions, moon, but I didn't understand the message.

deryk
05-27-2011, 04:39 PM
This made me laugh. I haven't figured out the metaphor yet. I have a couple mild guesses I won't divulge. I'm guessing it's either purely nonsensical or sinister.

hillwalker
05-27-2011, 05:30 PM
I'm seeing craters -but they would all have to be 'innies' rather than 'outies' I'm guessing - there again perhaps I'm taking this too literally.

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Delta40
05-27-2011, 06:18 PM
it is subtext to say that women's bellybuttons are not really the central point of interest....