A Wildcat.

[zoolane]

A Wildcat.

A wildcat parade itself in her fur for all to see, waiting the queen bee to release her captives. Marvel as her skin at shook the warm ocean blue. Slips as it gentle kisses her skin as it go by. The bees came to her aid and as she thrusted her chest. The sound become so intense that the wind runs past them all. The wildcat give roar of willing to allowing them strip her bare.

Enchanting glance of excitement began to fill her breath. Slowly the bees pick out the stitch's from her costume. The layers of garments fell apart as the gust wind and blew them away. The wildcat stood naked as her flesh set blaze with bees as well.

[kittypaws]

Zoo....who are the bees....busy bees?

kittypaws...

always wanting to know!

[Bluehound]

I love this it is so luxurious and poetic, in fact it could easily be turned into a poem I think.
Keep them coming Zoo.

[zoolane]

Zoo....who are the bees....busy bees?

kittypaws...

always wanting to know!

That would be telling, who do you think they are? Kittypaws.

[hillwalker]

This sounds rather like a fable - the wildcat possibly being a female figure who takes pride in her appearance and the bees the other girls who are jealous of her looks...

...but actually it's too original a piece to tear it apart in search of some hidden meaning. It is very poetical and rather mysterious.

My only quibble would be the word 'ejected' - it doesn't seem to fit in the context. And even it was the correct word you wouldn't need the word 'outwards' following it because 'eject' means to thrust or throw something out. It's a bit like saying 'I descended down the stairs' - which would mean you went down down the stairs.

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[zoolane]

This sounds rather like a fable - the wildcat possibly being a female figure who takes pride in her appearance and the bees the other girls who are jealous of her looks...

...but actually it's too original a piece to tear it apart in search of some hidden meaning. It is very poetical and rather mysterious.

My only quibble would be the word 'ejected' - it doesn't seem to fit in the context. And even it was the correct word you wouldn't need the word 'outwards' following it because 'eject' means to thrust or throw something out. It's a bit like saying 'I descended down the stairs' - which would mean you went down down the stairs.

H

H, you're near right. Thank you for comments. I have re edit it thank you one and all.