Kyazi Asssasin

[DrachenSeele]

Part 1:
The man sat on the bed staring down at his phone. He pressed 'talk'. Lifting the phone up to his ear he waited for someone to answer. It rung for a few. It was an enternity to him. Please leave your message after the tone.
He took a deep breath. "Xalim," his voice was normally low and firm, but at the moment it was breaking, "It's me, Kyazi. I'll take the job. I'll be your assassin."
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I'll post some more later

[Delta40]

Edit this. It does not flow or read well. Read it out loud and you will see.

Lifting the phone up to his ear he waited for someone to answer or for the answering machine. It rung for a few. It felt like an enternity.

I like the rest and it seems like a cool intro to a short story.

[DrachenSeele]

Thank you. I see what you are saying. I will edit it.