"What On Earth"

[zoolane]

"What On Earth?"

"What on earth were you think?

"Not sure but I am sure it all worked in the end".

"You mean, you hope and pray it does?".

"I know it was stupid to agree to. I just could help myself it is to good to pass up"

"Good luck, I hope you are going reading up and do practice before the event. Please don't tell me that you going bluff your way thought?".

"No, I did not said did I. Anyway I pretty that the green parade will be able to tell".

"Maybe I have to if to. If I just stand in the background".

"I don't like sound of this. Please said that you will said something before it to late".

"Yeah I suppose I should but.........".

Later on in the day, I was in big, miracle room. Suit and booted in the later trend. And I did not escape the attention of the boss advance. Before I knew it. I had sharp, shine metal object in my hand and slicing flesh. Suddenly alarm when mad. I got push one side while they try save the body. To my misfortune and misguide. The body could not be save. I am now responsible for baby death. Only one to blame for my own disillusion and self belief. I should told my boss that I couldn't even slice and stitch's on the dumbs.

[hillwalker]

I began reading this thinking someone had agreed to give a speech in public perhaps -or take part in a performance for which they were not properly prepared...

...so it was a shock to find that it's about a surgical nurse/midwife (not sure?) who's brandishing a scalpel presumably and not qualified or experienced enough to safely carry out her job.

I think one or two more clues might have been helpful - even suggesting it takes place in a hospital or even an operating theatre before we get to the 'act' itself for example would probably be enough, and raise the tension without a doubt.

H

[zoolane]

"What On Earth?"

"No, I did not said did I. Anyway I pretty that the green parade will be able to tell".

Later on in the day, I was in big, miracle room. Suit and booted in the later trend.

One clue is =Green Parade OK fair enough very hard clue but surely second one was bit more oblivious.

[zoolane]

Scenario Two.

"What on earth was that noise?"

"I do not know. I bet if we leave, we will soon found out. What next?"

"Erm wh- what that tapping sound?"

"Quick come here and hold my hand tight".

"I dare you to open the door and have glance?"

"No, it OK anyway it your idea. You do it".

"OK. If I open door slightly, we can both have look. Agreed?

"Yea OK".

They both peek thought the crack but could see anything. The strange noises seem getting loud ed. The noise is echoing in old oak box. They starting to quiver with frighten. They think they can heard whispers in the distance. Until the crack in the door is widening by inch at time.

"Boo. I found you both. Who it?"

[hillwalker]

No, you've lost me totally.

Green Parade means nothing - nor does Miracle Room - or indeed Suited and Booted except it's standard meaning to be ready to go out on the town possibly.

I give up

H

[zoolane]

In hospitals they were green clothes for surgery reason. The miracle room is the operation room because were life or death decision are made. The suited and booted term was one I put in there due fact of maybe 1 year or certain type medical student would said.

[hillwalker]

In hospitals they were green clothes for surgery reason. The miracle room is the operation room because were life or death decision are made. The suited and booted term was one I put in there due fact of maybe 1 year or certain type medical student would said.

So I was part right - I thought you were suggesting my first guess was totally wrong. :0

H

[zoolane]

Sorry. You on the track to start with.

[zoolane]

Scenario Three.

"What on earth did you do this time?"

"Nothing. I swear I did".

"You MUST done something?".

"No. Not this time".

"So you admit that all other time it was you own doing that I was haul up in to.....".

"No it not what I am said"

"Well what was this time? Someone stare at you or you just couldn't be bother to try?".

"She was picking on me again and called me fat".

"So that why I got phone say that you were rude and sleep".

"NO NO that a damn lie".

"You grounded for two week and exclude of a week. Luck me".

"What on earth is this with the bragged top in aid for anyway?"

"I just get cold easily".

"Now can it middle of summer in 60 degree outside and just below inside".

"Oh no you don't come here.

She caution by her arm. Her mother stood wait for adolescent girl to take off the jumper but she refuse. The girl starting to sweat on her brow and fidget to think of always to escape her mother. Her mother end took pair scissors and cut jump off. she to amazing in reveal a bump. Young child eyes staring to watery but catch ray of sun thought the back door. Her mother got dustpan and brush to tidy up the broke mug. After while of stare at each other. Her mum final spoke.

"Now can you be with child? when still child yourself. You are only twelve. Beside who is the father?"

"Please do not make me tell you. He said that it must be secret".

"Who is it?"

She hand her mum her five year dairy but only be writing for last two years. She was allow to leave and go to her room. For rest of the afternoon all she hear from downstairs is crying and smash things. The girl suddenly go up and put on favorite song at full blast. She find some pens and wrote on her walls. Her mum enter the room and sit next to her on the bed. She give her daughter the teddy cuddle which used sharing when she four year old.

"Is it all true? and your are three months gone?"

"Yes to both questions and I am sorry".

"Why didn't you tell me?".

"He said that you would hate me for make him leave us".

"I am home, where are two favorite girls?"