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Vignette
05-12-2011, 11:58 PM
Seeds of delusion

root in the fertile consciousness.

Nurtured by the inability...

No! - The refusal -
To accept truth in its nakedness.

In my self-deception,

I inadvertently
sow the seeds

of my own suffering.

Jerrybaldy
05-14-2011, 07:50 PM
I liked the self depracation of your self deception, but line 4 broke the flow for me

Vignette
05-16-2011, 01:15 AM
Thanks for commenting Jerry. I was trying to convey that it was by choice, and not because of the lack of capacity to see things as they really are. I wanted that point to stand out, but in hindsight it might be better if I delete that 4th line altogether.