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MystyrMystyry
05-12-2011, 07:09 PM
some folx who live inside a prism
don't let the world know
what it is with 'em
and then one
day it all
comes
apart

some folx who enjoy the good
life forget that there may
arrive a day when
there are no
more good
times to
be had

some folx forget to look into
the mirror deeply and see
what may have been
were they born as
someone other
than their
selves

some folx probably couldn't
handle being anyone
else for a day
or even an
hour or a
minute
really



.

Delta40
05-13-2011, 09:02 PM
Nicely set out. It feels a bit detached though. I find some folx is another way of saying 'this is not me but quite likely you'!

MystyrMystyry
05-13-2011, 11:43 PM
You think it's that good!? Gee, thanks Delta!


p.s. of course it's not about me - why would it be about me?

Jerrybaldy
05-14-2011, 08:08 PM
Blimey MM to have this much time for this much creativity you have to be unemployed

MystyrMystyry
05-14-2011, 08:24 PM
I'm an artist JB :) - it's my aptitude and career