Reborn?

[zoolane]

Reborn?


Morbid as sun touches the horizon, the young body out stretch on moist river bank, with unsettle drift across the water. The arm of the guest hang bare against the dew of the new morning. A single toe sent mini whirl pool in murky water. The small body laid motiveless on the carpet which covered the ground. The breeze took the her sheet away from her, did she feel cold I wonder? As I stare that fragile thing, laid nake in the warm air. Should I join my ill fate friend? Really I should be the one with silence within my soul so my heart can regain self respect just like it was when I was born. To reborn it would wondrous miracle but if only my dream would come true. I would slit throat and wrists here and now.

[hillwalker]

Macabre in the extreme - you always have the knack to focus attention on the tiniest details that make something disturbing seem even more real.

H

[Delta40]

So dark. I wondered if the image was the writers own self-reflection at the river bank.

[zoolane]

So dark. I wondered if the image was the writers own self-reflection at the river bank.

Yes you're right myself reflection on the bank of the river.

[Steven Hunley]

The imagery---almost poetic. Evocative.

[zoolane]

Thank you one and all.