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L€lä RËmØ MÅðçÂ
05-08-2011, 10:29 AM
A story is usually written by one person, or two or so. But this is a character sharing story. Each person is one character. "Auditions" will be held and "declared" through a comment. To speak out of character, use >><<.
>>Hey! This isn't a short story, but basically a summary, plot, theme, all that good stuff.<<

Gold Isn't All That Matters

A 14-year-old girl, is bored, and it's nearing the end of April in her hometown. It's very warm outside, so she decides to plant a flower. It's a rose, and she plants, it right in the big pot. She has moved from New York to Indiana. She must go to the new school. Although a brave girl and emotional girl, she is a silent outcast, and looks down on the popular classmates without speaking a single word. Not content with showing herself, "hanging out", having friends, inviting guests to her house she is. She has a reason to stay quiet. Earlier in New York, they experienced an earthquake. Not only did it destroy, but it uncovered a little more of New York. Daniella, the 14-year old planting girl, is adventurous. No matter how dangerous, she goes out of her house, unharmed, to an area, ripped form the Earth. It was a valley, easy to get into, since the area wasn't too steep. She walked down, and discovered how far it went. At the bottom, the gorge was ripped a little more. It was covered with soil, and she thought that it was too uneven to just be soil. She brushed it, and found a huge gold chunk, as big as her head. She slips it into her coat and heads home. She slips inside, and puts the gold in her room. She finds out the next day that during the earthquake, her mother's workplace crashed, and that their father died. They move to Indiana to be safer.

So right now, she plants a little rose. It grows, and she holds it, finding a portal to a world anew. Her mom is away at work until 11 o' clock, and it is 3 o' clock.
>>When you guys start, you have to start from the beginning, explaining the things that happen before, then her planting, portal. Then you can make up the rest.<<
>>Yes, the gold is real! And I should have said California, but TOO many earthquakes! <<

Characters-
Daniella, the 14-year-old girl- Me! L€lä RËmØ MÅðçÂ
Mom, The person who watches Daniella.
Running:
Brenda-A classmate, Daniella's best friend at the new school.
Running:
Shirlene, A popular girl who Daniella looks down on. Very loud and freestyle, although friendly. Loves to gossip.
Running:
Brendon, just a little friend of Daniella. Helps her out when in trouble, and very smart.
Running:
Teacher, someone who watches when Shirlene passes notes.
Running:
Damion, a silly person. Fun to be with, friendly. Hangs out with Daniella, when not dancing in the hallways. That's his favorite thing. He dances before every class.
Running:
Terri- A spunk girl, who loves to read comics. Is friendly with Daniella, but they are just acquaintances.
Running:

>>New Characters will come and be added in the portal! ;) <<

>>Anyone wanna try? Auditions held now!
The additions of friends were because I din't want to be the only person playing a BIG part in this because I am Daniella! Even Daniella needs friends to get through life! Smiles to all the participants! Keep it going! Have fun with this! <<

>>Third person writing please!
Example:
Daniella walked through the hallways, excited to be in such a big house. Brenda had invited her over.<<

Daniella was at her home in New York. She was on the floor, doing her homework. Her mom was at work, but she still did what she was supposed to. Daniella finished her homework and packed her book-bag. She went downstairs and did the laundry. She went back upstairs and cooked herself a cup of noodles. Her little two-story house was small. It was comfy, though.

>>Bye I will check later for more people! Please someone come on in!<<

iverson
05-08-2011, 10:58 AM
well,be honest, i donot really understand this story, will reay it again. any way, thanks for shairng.

L€lä RËmØ MÅðçÂ
05-08-2011, 11:07 AM
>> Uh your sposed to rewrite whats already going on, then continues.<<

Alexander III
05-08-2011, 11:14 AM
Hmm I think you should move this to the general writing section as that would be it's appropriate place, but I quite like the idea a type of role-play play.

Delta40
05-08-2011, 05:18 PM
LOL. Are you writing a play for a school project?

I'll be Mom.

'Come on honey. We have to get the car loaded up before 9am. Daniella! Did you hear me? (Thud, thud, thud down the stairs) What the hell are you lugging in that bag? You teens! Anybody would think the junk you hang onto was gold! Get a move on. We'll stop at Macca's on the way for breakfast ok?'

L€lä RËmØ MÅðçÂ
05-09-2011, 08:35 AM
>> I supposed the earthquake has happened.<<

L€lä RËmØ MÅðçÂ
05-09-2011, 05:29 PM
'Mom! Come on! You'll talk with Macca for an hour! Can I at least go get a book? I'm patient, but that would be too long!' She put on her Nike® shoes. Her mom unlocked the cars, and Daniella ran in. Soon they arrived at Macca's Pancake House.
Macca: "Oh, hello! What do you want today?"
Mom: "Darn the new talking GPS! It thought I said Macca! I meant McDonalds! I'm not giving you pancakes, ok? >>DElta's Line<<
Daniella: "Mom, can I have a blueberry pancake with extra syrup, waffles, and and ice cream?"
Mom: "No. I hate pancakes and we both like McDonald's." >>DElta's line<<
Daniella: "...................."
Mom: "Hm?"
Daniella:"I have a test today and your'e letting me eat this?!"
Mom: "Better than cream and blueberries. Now get that Mcmuffin in you or I'll never buy fast food again!" >>DElta's line<<
>>LOL. The main point was the humor.
Lucky, they get pancakes! Im gonna leave mom to fill in the blank on this. Collaboration post. No this is for fun. I'm not even part of the drama team. Sometimes their presence even annoys me... This DAniella is very ignorant...<<

Delta40
05-09-2011, 05:56 PM
[QUOTE=L€lä RËmØ MÅðçÂ;1033009]'Mom! Come on! You'll talk with Macca for an hour! Can I at least go get a book? I'm patient, but that would be too long!' She put on her Nike® shoes. Her mom unlocked the cars, and Daniella ran in. Soon they arrived at Macca's Pancake House.
Macca: "Oh, hello Daniella! What do you want today?"
Mom: I meant McDonalds! I'm not giving you pancakes ok?
Daniella: "Mom, can I have a blueberry pancake with extra syrup, waffles, and and ice cream?"
Mom: No. I hate pancakes and we both like McDonalds
Daniella:"................'
Mom:"Hm?"
Daniella:"I have a test today and your'e letting me eat this?!"
Mom: Better than cream and blueberries. Now get that Mcmuffin in you or I'll never buy fast food again!

I thought they're moving or something...

L€lä RËmØ MÅðçÂ
05-09-2011, 06:06 PM
>>Lol delta! Last day at school, cuz mom's gotta arrange plane ticket junk. I had no Idea what Macca meant! I even thought that was a friend!Im gonna move this stuff over to mine, but youll get your credit. I have had cravings for instant spicy noodles for 3 months.... Addictive!<<

" Today's my last day at this school, but I'm worried. I have only one friend here, but I don't think I'll have any at all over there in that Indeiyahna place!" Joy, her best friend said, "Why the heck are you talking to yourself? Anyways, you'll make friends!" "Bye, Joy!", Daniella. Daniella shuffled to the principal's office, where her mom already was.

Mom: "_____!"
Daniella:" I'm on my way. "
Mom: "______"
Daniella: " Oh Mother, must I say bye to EVERYONE in my class? I despise talking with those popular 'Oh my god I'm so freaking hot and you are just a screwy" girls!"

L€lä RËmØ MÅðçÂ
05-09-2011, 06:25 PM
They arranged tickets and got to the airport. They had sold their old car, as well. The widowed mother and child went aboard the plane.


>>More will come! Gotsa log off. And I'm waiting for the previous one to take place. Barely anything works without people collaborating in here!<<

L€lä RËmØ MÅðçÂ
05-12-2011, 08:00 PM
I lonely now!

L€lä RËmØ MÅðçÂ
05-15-2011, 07:24 PM
Argh someone come please? This is suprisingly not getting enough views!

L€lä RËmØ MÅðçÂ
05-15-2011, 09:03 PM
Lets try to keep this going thank you very much.

hillwalker
05-16-2011, 09:30 AM
I think you are best giving this up and trying to write a story yourself.

I can't make head nor tail of what you're trying to do on this thread anyway... and I'm guessing I'm not the only one.

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L€lä RËmØ MÅðçÂ
05-16-2011, 07:54 PM
NO! I stay strong. i.......