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sophiethomas
05-05-2011, 12:54 AM
Me and my friend had a routine of morning walk but that day…………
Going on morning walk fills you with lot of energy.

You can witness the beauty of rising sun, sweet songs of birds,newspaperman, snack stalls,people selling healthy vegetable juices, grand parents busy in laughter clubs, people performing various exercises and yoga.Oh and also people busy with sports and morning driving lessons.

Fresh breeze make you feel lively and gives pleasure your soul. It makes me wonder how different are these activities from rest of the days. We both had just parked our bi-cycles near public playground where some boys were playing football.

We both walked for at least 6 miles little more than our regular distances and knew that had to return back after walking for more 6 miles.It was new street for us.

We sat on a road side bench and rested for some time. Suddenly a mad man stood before us and was staring on us. I did’nt know what to do and as he was coming to us my eyes filled with fear. My friend started shivering and I was unable to breathe I knew in few minutes he was going to attack on us.
I took hold of my friends hand and started running without turning back, stopped when we reached to public play ground.
We thanked god and decided not to go on strange streets.
That morning walk gave a lesson not to attempt walk on strange roads.

I will always remember morning walk of that day.

hillwalker
05-05-2011, 06:30 AM
Is this a true story?

I loved the descriptions of the streets in the morning - all the little details bring the story to life.

I wasn't so sure about the appearance of the 'mad man' because it happened so suddenly. How did you know he was mad? It might have been better just to tell us you saw a stranger up ahead of you and as he got closer he started behaving strangely. Bit by bit you grew more frightened until you had to run for your lives. Let the reader share your fear the same way we shared your joy earlier in the story.

H