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zoolane
04-28-2011, 04:49 AM
Naive, stupid young girl.
With guilty that bring to boil but simmer under padlock box in darkest corner of her mind.
Pushing it way thought all it suggests, ideas and brain waves to re surf in fore front of her mind.
Embedded above her eyes, emotions swirl the small whirlpool that form itself.
Nudges the confidence to find do something obvious the Police are govern to do something
Deny it all deed but deep down monster is still at large.

hillwalker
04-28-2011, 03:13 PM
As always one can sense the pain behind your poetry - the torment of someone placed in an unbearable situation through no fault of her own. Damned if she does; damned if she doesn't.

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PrinceMyshkin
04-28-2011, 03:24 PM
This seems to gather force as you go along!

Delta40
04-28-2011, 05:10 PM
You paint this in such a way that one can imagine being padlocked in a box as metaphorically as she is in her own mind, Zoo