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Asphara
04-27-2011, 03:22 AM
I owe the one worldy early I owe
The one world, the way early I owe owe a one world early way i owe
a world of words surge forward world I know sea surges
worlds away from
word sea surges worlds away from known
Delta40
04-27-2011, 03:28 AM
May I ask if English is your first language?
Asphara
04-27-2011, 04:11 AM
English is my first language. May I ask if poetry is your first profession?
MorpheusSandman
04-27-2011, 04:26 AM
Nobody has poetry as a first profession. The vast majority of all poets throughout history had day jobs.
Anyway, this piece reminds me of that phenomenon (I'm sure there's a name for it) where you repeat a word over and over until it loses its meaning and becomes pure phonetics. I do think there's a sense of drowning in a sea of words here, but words as pure signifiers rather than referents and signifieds. It's an interesting experimental piece.
Delta40
04-27-2011, 04:27 AM
It wasn't meant as an insult and I'm sure other people will read your swirl of words.
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