Absence

[CarlyStephenson]

(raise your hand if you detest long distance relationships!)


Rolling hills that separate -
a barrier for our love

Knowing isn't enough


She waits


Time. It hurries for no one

The clock stops...
Everything.
Stands.
Still.


Can tomorrow be today?

[everyadventure]

I liked your last line... who hasn't wished the day away at one time or another?

[MorpheusSandman]

I really like the use of ellipsis here, which I always feels suits the theme of time and memory extremely well. Although, I think "Time. It hurries for no one" and the four line stanza feel cliche and out of place in such a piece.