Looking for feedback on a poem I have written

[z2011]

Hi,

This is a poem I have written, looking forward to reading your opinions about it:

What would you do if you wake up thirsty in the middle of night………….
Searching, And no water was around………….
What would you do if you lost the blanket warms you in a winter night………..
If you lost the only candle and you alone in the dark…………
If you were alive and part of your body taken apart…………..
If you lost the love of your life……………
What would you do………..
Don't tell me it's life…………
Same words, same expressions, over, and over, I said to others all my life…………..
Now, how can I breathe……
How can I live……………
And, just for her I was alive……..
Every morning counting seconds to see her smile………….
To see the life doors opening for me through her eyes…………..
To see the wind blowing her hair, on my face, flies………….
To walk me n her holding hands very tight…....
Just to feel the touch of her lips on my cheeks lies………..
If you lost the love of your life………….
What would you do……………
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Source: http://poemszm.blogspot.com/

Regards

[dfloyd]

if you read a very bad poem.