Nurture

[Jerrybaldy]

Baby with the piercings
Baby with the Nike
Mummy with the big mouth
Baby with the Gucci.
Daddy with the knuckles
Baby with the Big Mac
Daddy with the ketchup
Mummy with the ice crack.
Daddy with the grease spots
Mummy with the large fries
Daddy with the white lines
Baby with the black eyes.

[deryk]

This is hard to critique, it's so pointy. Amusingly, I had considered writing a poem about pierced babies, it's a good first line. I especially like the mixture of "high" and "low" products. It reminds me of what Andy Warhol once said about everyone enjoying a coca-cola the same regardless of their income bracket.

[PrinceMyshkin]

This was, like, brilliant until the last line - which was like a fist full of brass knuckles!!!

[everyadventure]

Pretty gruesome, oh bald one!

[Delta40]

You take the parent out of parenthood here Jerry and leave us with the rest