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Bluehound
03-26-2011, 02:56 PM
Thanks , removed for rewrite.

Delta40
03-26-2011, 05:40 PM
This has to be one of the best stories I have read on Lit-Net. Your writing style flows so well in this story which, although seems weird and I asked my self all the way through 'there has to be a twist somehwere.' You actually revealed the truth of the human condition. You don't miss something until it has gone. You did this beautifully.

Bluehound
03-28-2011, 08:54 AM
Thankyou, I am very glad you like it.

Delta40
03-28-2011, 09:50 AM
Good judgment call