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Jerrybaldy
03-11-2011, 08:42 PM
Removed
Delta40
03-11-2011, 10:20 PM
It isn't a rabbit ok????
PrinceMyshkin
03-12-2011, 08:25 AM
Removed


In other words... gone?
Haunted
03-12-2011, 11:41 AM
Leave...leaving...left?
everyadventure
03-12-2011, 11:55 AM
Your best poem yet!

(Kidding, kidding! Now put it back so we can all admire!)
deryk
03-13-2011, 06:07 PM
Removing the poem hurt my expectations more than reading any version of it would have. What a drag! I was looking forward to it!
Delta40
03-13-2011, 06:09 PM
lol. I read the original and was reminded of a child who sticks out his tongue to the rest of us and exclaims loudly and proudly 'I don't even care, so there!' Jerry really is a master - even when he doesn't try and I think he might get some enjoyment from that fact (supposition only by me of course)
Haunted
03-13-2011, 06:12 PM
Not being able to read it is KILLING me
Delta40
03-13-2011, 06:15 PM
sometimes I paste a lit-net members poems to a file - but this was not one of them. He implied that my battery powered rabbit would not change the world from a feminist perspective.... I think.

Why not start a thread where we can vote Jerry repost it since so many seem to want to hear his gastro-reflux poetry!

(due respect to Jerrybaldy always)