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Biggus
03-11-2011, 05:05 AM
SEPARATE

Sleeping separate nights
Living separate days
We live separate lives
Let’s go our separate ways

DIVORCE IS..... # 1

Divorce is…
Cathartic, purification
Therapeutically purgative
Like colonic irrigation

deryk
03-18-2011, 01:08 PM
The second stanza really shines in its relief and spiteful purity. I didn't care for the rhyme scheme of the first.

Biggus
03-21-2011, 04:55 AM
Thanks Deryk

Delta40
03-21-2011, 05:48 AM
LOVE the second stanza Biggus. When I let go boy did it feel great!

Biggus
03-21-2011, 10:16 AM
Thanks Delta