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zoolane
03-04-2011, 04:37 PM
Gossip

Words, gossip is out, felling through the cracking in the air.
I am talking of the town, with whispers and clam up when they see me.
Poison pen emails from all direction.
Tins of worms evitable will break relationships or friendships.
But it has done.


Tick.

Shall I ramble about the week events?
Thoughts that linger in my brain, tick tick.
They said that time great healer but is just time bomb waiting happen?
Explosive memory become massive wound.
With pain of previous life, flood the present.

PrinceMyshkin
03-04-2011, 05:20 PM
There's plenty of energy in both of these but the second one just seemed to EXPLODE on the page!

jhooper3581
03-04-2011, 07:27 PM
Okay. I guess I didn't understand the correct definition of poetry of air? I guess pen is all needed to write poetry, but this poetry honestly confused me. Any analysis please?

Jerrybaldy
03-04-2011, 08:09 PM
Hi zoo
every time I read your work, I feel I am seeing the expression of what you cannot express any other way. It always feels personal
JerryB

zoolane
04-12-2011, 12:40 PM
Hi zoo
every time I read your work, I feel I am seeing the expression of what you cannot express any other way. It always feels personal
JerryB

I have hardly express my feelings or thought so only way I know how is throught writing.