Paragraph on Thoreau's "Walden"

[AnEliteLegacy]

Hi everyone.

I was assigned a paragraph today that had to incorporate three significant quotations from Thoreau that conveyed one of his main ideas that he uses in Walden. The paragraph is written, but I'm looking for someone to go over it and possibly help me out where it's needed. It's surprisingly difficult to write about and articulate thoughts surrounding Thoreau, so any help would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks!

[LostGeneration]

I actually studied Thoreau's Walden last semester at school. I would be more than happy to help you if you would like me to. I don't know how much I remember, but two minds are better than one :)