Poem for An *******

[everyadventure]

My poem for you is concise.
It deflates you like a pricked
balloon; spluttering your last breath of hot air,
you shrivel down to size.

I pen these words with precise calligraphy,
and end with a flourished curlicue:
f*** you.

[PrinceMyshkin]

Indeed, it must have been difficult to find a rhyme for "curlicue"! Congratulations.

Now as for one for *******, might I suggest *******?

[moonbird]

My God! I can think of more than a few people I'd love to give that poem to. Or maybe I'd just read it to them aloud. Well, you've proved that everyone deserves a poem dedicated to them, even the sh*t of the world... Nicely done :)

[Hawkman]

Seems someone rattled your cage today, ea. :D Short, sweet and to the point - lol

Live and be well - H

[AuntShecky]

Present company excepted, oh, how I hope.

Auntie ( or should I say ******?)

[everyadventure]

Oh geez, sorry guys... my poetry has been suffering the past few days! I'll give it the old college try tomorrow...

[cogs]

what's a furlicyou? :angelsad2:

[Biggus]

Bravo, Right on the money

[Buh4Bee]

I like it, for its bluntness.

[Delta40]

I thought I commented on this poem. You're fast becoming a favourite poet of mine EA!

[Bar22do]

What a shortcut... oh ho!
And how I ******* fear someone might think of giving me such a flourished curlicue!

Yours carefully self-deflated, just in case,

Bar