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jajdude
02-25-2011, 06:45 AM
The outskirts of towns tell you you're near
But not quite, for as you move inward
There's a rustle within you, and there
Is also a movement outward

There's an outskirts of hunger too,
A hunger of many faces --
The man who hasn't eaten all day,
And the one who has felt unloved for too long

He's on the outskirts of compassion I fear
And stranded on the edge of desire --
Shipwrecked perhaps on an island of dreams,
Surrounded by strangers with meaningless faces

PrinceMyshkin
02-25-2011, 08:51 AM
There is always something commendable in telling it as it is; with, as in this case, a quiet, unforced empathy. Other than that "grandeur" is a somewhat pompous word, I'd apply it to this.