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everyadventure
02-21-2011, 01:17 PM
Would you like to know a secret? Look beneath my mattress. Grab that green book. It's a journal of sorts… actually, it's a diary of lies. It's a habit I've had since the age of eight; every lie I tell, big or small, white, black, or grey, is carefully logged and dated. I used to keep track of the week's lies on a sheet of lined paper, torn from my Spelling notebook. I'd take it to confession, and dutifully recite every infraction into the dimness. Eventually the priest would sigh when I entered the booth; I could hear him settling deeper into his cushion. Sometimes he'd try to cut me short: "I see, you told some untruths," and would then assign my penance. But that seemed unforgivably risky-- did I chance being damned to purgatory because some lie went unaccounted? The priest assured me I did not, but I had my reservations. So I keep my lies in a book, just in case. Should I ever be called on to chronicle my misbehavior, I will be ready.

I'm on my seventh book. You may think that's a lot of lies, but if you tried it for a day, you'd realize you're a liar too. You told your mother you had company and you'd call back later. You told your co-worker you liked her haircut. You told your husband you had a headache. Those lies add up in a hurry.

At times it's hard to tell what qualifies as a lie, what belongs in the book. A broken promise? Even if I meant it at the time I said it? What about half-truths? Omissions? Silence when I should have spoken? But I strive to be honest about lying, and I think I've done a pretty good job of it.

If you take the time to look through my stack of diaries, you can watch me grow up. What did I lie about when I was eight? I stole my friend Marcy's Daffy Duck Pez dispenser, because she wouldn't share the candies…not one! Also, I told everyone in my Girl Scout troop that my father was a movie star; he lives in Hollywood because that's where all the movies are made. You've probably seen him, you know the older guy with the dark hair and whiskery chin? Yeah, that's him.

At 12, I lied when I said, vehemently, that I did not love Jack Butler. It was a silly, desperate lie, and no one-- especially not Jack-- believed me. Once I wore a bandaid to cover a zit and told everybody I'd hit my head on a cupboard corner. And I also told my grandmother I liked the purple sweatshirt she gave me, even though it was appliqued with a cat.

Things get interesting in Volume III. Sixteen-year-olds breathe lies. Fierce denials to parents: those aren't mine! And equally fierce claims to friends: of course I've done that! Lies to sisters: I didn't take it. To boyfriends: it's okay, I'm ready. And to priests: there's nothing else, Father.

Marriage complicates lying, as it complicates everything else. Try this experiment, and you will notice that the people you lie to most are those you're closest to. Maybe you don't want to hurt their feelings: of course it was good for me. Or you simply want them to believe you're the person they want you to be: I made it from scratch. Other times, you're trying to protect the tender underbelly of your relationship: I forgive you.

Sometimes I imagine someone, decades or centuries hence, finding these books. They'll read, August 9, 1992: My daddy gave me these earrings and they're real diamonds. January 14, 1999: Greg's parents were there the whole time. November 3, 2002: I do.

And they'll think it's all true, every word.

everyadventure
02-21-2011, 01:18 PM
Not sure if this should land here or in "general writing," as it isn't really a story? BTW, since I know you're wondering, I don't actually have a lie diary! :)

bortleman
02-21-2011, 01:31 PM
It's really rather sad how poorly people behave

hillwalker
02-21-2011, 02:29 PM
I enjoyed it - and it's true to life I think.

'I do' a lie? You little tinker! One assumes, of course, on that basis comment #2 is also a lie.

H

Delta40
02-21-2011, 05:10 PM
I think the last few lines pack real wallops as you spend the story discussing lies in general to become very specific toward the end. I enjoyed it.

cyberbob
02-21-2011, 10:00 PM
Excellent!

The title is a little generic though.

PrinceMyshkin
02-22-2011, 01:39 PM
But I strive to be honest about lying, and I think I've done a pretty good job of it.

Says who? I have a couple (maybe 20) problems with this:

1) I never got a strong feeling about what lying represented to her: a life-preserving strategy (see: lebenslüge) or an amusing game to play with/against adults she held in contempt?

2) The two lies that preceded the third (and I assumed most significant) didn't relate as clearly to the third as I'd have liked.

3) If "I do" is, as one would suppose, her response to the traditional, "Do you, X, take this man..." one badly needs some earlier hint, to be discovered upon re-reading perhaps, of how far she's gone in betraying it.

4-20... hyperbole.

everyadventure
02-22-2011, 01:51 PM
1) I never got a strong feeling about what lying represented to her: a life preserving strategy (see: lebenslüge) or an amusing game to play with/against adults she held in contempt? Must lying mean something? As mentioned in the beginning, everybody lies, often without even thinking about it... she's no more compulsive than most people in this respect.


2) The two lies that preceded the third (and I assumed most significant) didn't relate as clearly to the third as I'd have liked. They weren't meant to. It was more of a chronological thing, demonstrating how lies mature with us as we age. At first, we lie to friends, about things we wish were true... and later, we lie to parents, in an attempt to separate ourselves and gain independence... finally, we lie to those closest to us (for any of the reasons mentioned in the paragraph directly before), and by this time lying is so familiar to us that even the most sacred of promises are easily broken.


3) If "I do" is, as one would suppose, her response to the traditional, "Do you, X, take this man..." one badly needs some earlier hint, to be discovered upon re-reading perhaps, of how far she's gone in betraying it. It isn't meant to be a piece on marriage, and focusing on the betrayal of it, I feel, would take away from the central theme. Said in passing, it has more weight than if I were to explain it fully. It is as casual a lie as all the others; and that's the point.


4-20... hyperbole.
You think so?

Your comments and thoroughness in reading are always appreciated, Prince!

PrinceMyshkin
02-22-2011, 03:18 PM
Must lying mean something?Oh my goodness! How to answer this? Yes, yes, YES, I think lying must mean something - even more, in many cases, than telling the truth does. If you're asked whether you committed a particular social transgression, telling the truth might mean that you are brave or an iconoclast or simply that you were brought up to do so, but lying always I should think sayssomething about your position vis a vis the person to whom the lie is directed!

As mentioned in the beginning, everybody lies, often without even thinking about it... she's no more compulsive than most people in this respect.
Everyone lies,,, perhaps, but why does this particular liar need to point that out to us and to have 7 notebooks in which she has recorded every lie she ever told?

They weren't meant to. It was more of a chronological thing, demonstrating how lies mature with us as we age. At first, we lie to friends, about things we wish were true... and later, we lie to parents, in an attempt to separate ourselves and gain independence... finally, we lie to those closest to us (for any of the reasons mentioned in the paragraph directly before), and by this time lying is so familiar to us that even the most sacred of promises are easily broken.
Indeed? We get to be so comfortable with lying, or even to prefer it to the truth, that standing before a representative of God, and after hearing the man we've allowed to think we love him swear eternal fidelity to us, we lie IN ADVANCE of betraying him...

It isn't meant to be a piece on marriage, and focusing on the betrayal of it, I feel, would take away from the central theme. Said in passing, it has more weight than if I were to explain it fully. It is as casual a lie as all the others; and that's the point.

everyadventure
02-22-2011, 03:35 PM
but why does this particular liar need to point that out to us and to have 7 notebooks in which she has recorded every lie she ever told?


But that seemed unforgivably risky-- did I chance being damned to purgatory because some lie went unaccounted? The priest assured me I did not, but I had my reservations. So I keep my lies in a book, just in case. Should I ever be called on to chronicle my misbehavior, I will be ready.


we lie IN ADVANCE of betraying him...
Not necessarily... it might merely have been a half truth; in that she wasn't sure if this was a promise she would keep... or that, she at least meant the "richer / health" part of the promise!


At times it's hard to tell what qualifies as a lie, what belongs in the book. A broken promise? Even if I meant it at the time I said it? What about half-truths? Omissions? Silence when I should have spoken?

I'm pleased to have incited this little riot :) Anybody else who would like to join in the fray is invited!

Delta40
02-22-2011, 05:44 PM
I'm posting here EA to help you get your two pages of comments! I liked the story and I'm waving my pom poms in support of you

everyadventure
02-22-2011, 05:51 PM
:biggrinjester:Ha, thanks Delta... do I still get to be pleased about having 2 pages of comments if the majority of comments are my own?

PS How long do I have to be a member before I earn the right to use the esteemed dancing banana? I would hate to be presumptuous...

hillwalker
02-22-2011, 05:53 PM
I thought the whole point of the piece was that we are taught to not tell a lie - but it is in our nature to fabricate the truth. Her continued visits to the confessional were in response to her genetic Catholic guilt - but as she matured she was able to assuage her lying to the extent that even at the altar professing her devotion to her beloved husband-to-be in front of God she was able to commit such a lie with impunity.

The diaries used to record every transgression are presumably a device to symbolize her eternal guilt-complex.

H

and if you insist I'll :banana:throw two in for free :banana:

Delta40
02-22-2011, 05:55 PM
Lol. I think you can wiggle that banana anytime you are deemed a poet/writer :banana:

It comes across better if you only post on every other comment (that way, it looks like you're proactive in your own development)

Jerrybaldy
02-25-2011, 07:23 PM
Dare I say that sometimes things get over analysed on here. I loved it, the truth in your writing of the lies ( Don't lies just mean you would rather not tell the truth- shoot me for simplification here). Your story ( and yes it does belong in this section) felt very honest even though you have no book of lies you have a memory full of them.
hairyjerry (thats a lie)

sweety
02-26-2011, 06:04 AM
Absolute honesty can lead to trouble.

S

sweety
02-26-2011, 06:07 AM
I got you there :banana::banana: .

S

everyadventure
02-26-2011, 11:48 AM
PAGE TWO! I'd like to thank all who contributed.... now let us celebrate with the Banana Dance!
:banana::banana::banana::banana::banana::banana: