zoolane
02-20-2011, 08:50 AM
Face Book
She sits on the bench in the park, which is twenty miles away from where she lives. Her red hair catches the air as it cover her mouth. The trees are whisper to each other. The girl starting to shiver as the air gets damp. She wrap herself in the velvet coat mum just brought her. With her white jeans slightly stain from the mud where she trip over. She gets a text from friend supposes met “I am sorry but won’t meet you but my bro come against. He brings back our house”. She starting feels down, wondering whether she should just leave. Just then this boy approaches her with smile, wave that her. Her smile as hint shyness about it then she remembers that boy is best friend brother.
“Hi, it Sarah is it?” He mouth move in wary way. He wear dark black jean with yellow t-shirt with black baseball cap and baseball boots. Neil has ache all over his face.
Sarah opened her mouth and sound came out quietly “Yes, you must be Neil? Alice’s brother”.
“We should leave, before it started to rain” Neil reply in a commanding tone. The first drop touch Sarah nose.
Sarah felt uneasy about the situation but she desperate needed to see Alice. Sarah’s school life was getting unbearable for her and home life great. If only parents stop working and spend time with her instead of palm her off on other people. Neil started a chat about music because remember that private message that Alice received through Face book from Sarah. Finally reach the house on run down houses estate now Sarah is twenty five mile away from home. Neil opened the front door and allows Sarah in first. Neil closes the door with thud; slide the bolt across the up of the door.
“Where is Alice? Neil” Sarah’s voice sound shake and uncertain of the place she was in.
Neil took his cap and sit down on the chair front of the desk. He face changed from Neil to odd expression.
“Alice as not even existence, I am Alice and you are mine now” Neil smirk at her.
Few weeks pass, Neil had Sarah on sofa with him. The television was on, the news was on and Sarah saw her parents make emotional appeal for Sarah safe return. Sarah starting to weeping in silence, in hope Neil would not notice. Neil started laugh loud and “Well you have your parent’s attention now, just like you wanting. It shame you never see them again” Neil distort.
She sits on the bench in the park, which is twenty miles away from where she lives. Her red hair catches the air as it cover her mouth. The trees are whisper to each other. The girl starting to shiver as the air gets damp. She wrap herself in the velvet coat mum just brought her. With her white jeans slightly stain from the mud where she trip over. She gets a text from friend supposes met “I am sorry but won’t meet you but my bro come against. He brings back our house”. She starting feels down, wondering whether she should just leave. Just then this boy approaches her with smile, wave that her. Her smile as hint shyness about it then she remembers that boy is best friend brother.
“Hi, it Sarah is it?” He mouth move in wary way. He wear dark black jean with yellow t-shirt with black baseball cap and baseball boots. Neil has ache all over his face.
Sarah opened her mouth and sound came out quietly “Yes, you must be Neil? Alice’s brother”.
“We should leave, before it started to rain” Neil reply in a commanding tone. The first drop touch Sarah nose.
Sarah felt uneasy about the situation but she desperate needed to see Alice. Sarah’s school life was getting unbearable for her and home life great. If only parents stop working and spend time with her instead of palm her off on other people. Neil started a chat about music because remember that private message that Alice received through Face book from Sarah. Finally reach the house on run down houses estate now Sarah is twenty five mile away from home. Neil opened the front door and allows Sarah in first. Neil closes the door with thud; slide the bolt across the up of the door.
“Where is Alice? Neil” Sarah’s voice sound shake and uncertain of the place she was in.
Neil took his cap and sit down on the chair front of the desk. He face changed from Neil to odd expression.
“Alice as not even existence, I am Alice and you are mine now” Neil smirk at her.
Few weeks pass, Neil had Sarah on sofa with him. The television was on, the news was on and Sarah saw her parents make emotional appeal for Sarah safe return. Sarah starting to weeping in silence, in hope Neil would not notice. Neil started laugh loud and “Well you have your parent’s attention now, just like you wanting. It shame you never see them again” Neil distort.