PDA

View Full Version : The Drink.



zoolane
02-19-2011, 10:43 AM
The Drink.


“Stunning as she might be, is it worth you risk it all?’’ He quietly sent words across stained table.

I raised head from my pint of beer, “I know what your said but I can’t help myself. She has got deep sky blue eyes you have ever seen. Her hair is smooth and colour of coca and pearl white smile on pure, pale skin. Her young body make my body quiver just think about her”.
The man get up leave he’s once friend to stew with the dilemma.

After hour, I decide to go home, dreamed all way of my angel just five minutes away. I stand look up that the window were the goddess is. I notice a black pipe leading up to the platform just front of the panel glass. My trainers are slipped from beneath me but final here. I find the window open slightly with of persuade it open fullness. Slowly I lift and pouring myself in to her luxury room where is lay motionless like princess with slender young body. I approach her with enchanting look on my face, crawling on all four, and slide my fingers up the cover toward angelical face. My hands stroke her tender neck suddenly my feel surge to tightly my grip.

everyadventure
02-19-2011, 11:00 AM
Disturbing. Creepy. I have goosebumps.

hillwalker
02-19-2011, 11:03 AM
Wow zoo, you certainly know how to scare your readers. This was beyond creepy - and I love the way you described him 'pouring' himself into the room like some evil poisonous fluid.

H

zoolane
02-19-2011, 04:10 PM
I wake in my own bed, with her scent linger over me and I have her favour scarf. The one I saw wear that day, it lighter purple with silver ribbon run through it. I pinned to my wall where I keep my photos of my heavenly girl. My headache is banged with worst hangover for long while. I started flash backs from night before. I remember climb and touch her. My hands round her neck. A broaden smile started to develop on my face and now I know but only I can have her.

I fetch from the side a can, sit in chair and watch the people pass by. Auburn, curls catch my eye, tan crisp skin. Dark rouge lips, bosom you could suffocate in died in peace. Long legs up to her waist which just perfect. I reach for camera, for best shot and check time. I have found my divine creature for my world to be whole.

Delta40
02-19-2011, 06:09 PM
You send shivers up my spine. I too liked the pouring sentence. Evil!