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Donna allegra
02-18-2011, 03:25 PM
Us: Straining to be passionless and cheerful
swallowing the screams inside our chests
like so many tumors

“Textbook” cancer, doctors tell us
while simultaneously feeding us a steady dose
of false hope

Suck it up, they suggest
Pain, anger, hopelessness, faithlessness,
Sense of being right

Alone, without her comfort,
without her nurturing
Together, but each separate
like never before

United in the waiting for her to wake up
And watching the numbers on her screen
Like falling temperatures
Before the big storm


Her: Silently absorbing the beeping, whirring, rushing of ICU
Waiting for her body to give its last
Unable to speak, or move, alone in her head

Love of her life holding her hand,
Patiently willing her to heal
So they two could go home

Sepsis stealing, cancer polluting,
color sapped,
transformed back to hairless infancy
by hospital gown and cooing loved ones

Her soul on a precipice,
Pain working to accomplish the goal.

Letting go of what she knows is not important anymore
Drugged on medication, on this thing she does here,
On this thing she is becoming

Alone in her head,
dreaming of desperate voices and stroking hands,
she offers a trace of a squeeze or a slight nod
to give one last sign of affection

“Do you want to keep trying?” her love asks.
A last moment of clarity: her head twitches side to side.

Delta40
02-18-2011, 05:52 PM
What a beautifully crafted poem. It contains all the elements of dealing with the terminal end of a loved one from both sides. The ending is perfect.

everyadventure
02-18-2011, 06:59 PM
How tender and sad. This line is the heart of the poem: "Together, but each separate
like never before." One moving on where the other cannot follow...