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Helga
02-13-2011, 04:26 AM
Ok I wrote this yesterday morning in like 10 minuets, mainly because I was annoyed with all the commercials for Valentine's day, I am Not a fan. Anyway there was a competition last week for the best love poem and I don't write love poems but then I looked at my cup and decided to write down my thoughts. Now my sister in law wants to use it but I have never allowed anyone to use my poems and especially not something I put really no work into...




I think of you
in the morning
you are what I want
everyday
First thing I look for
when I come home
last thing I see
before sleep.

I can smell you
I can taste you
on my lips
running warm
through my body

Too much of you
and I shake,
too little, I ache

Can't be without you
you're bitter, you're sweet
you are perfect
for me.

MystyrMystyry
02-13-2011, 06:39 AM
This is great!

everyadventure
02-13-2011, 12:25 PM
Fantastic double entendre here!

qimissung
02-13-2011, 07:08 PM
I know you didn't take long to write it, Helga, but that doesn't stop this from being good-to the last drop!

YesNo
02-13-2011, 07:37 PM
Now my sister in law wants to use it but I have never allowed anyone to use my poems and especially not something I put really no work into...

Nice poem. I don't think the quantity of work one puts into something determines its quality.

I also liked the Frida Khalo quote in your signature.

hillwalker
02-14-2011, 11:58 AM
A love for caffeine - what a great poem.

H

Bar22do
02-14-2011, 01:08 PM
Bravo! very nice! not much risqué, for the good coffee smell gives off just a little moment after one starts reading your poem!
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