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Delta40
02-12-2011, 09:09 AM
I don't know what
extreme relativism
means
but he has labelled me
'one of them'
even if I cannot understand.
Trust him, he insists.
He is certain he knows
what he is talking about.

All decisions are simple
Only people complicate them.

I ask if it is ok
to mind my own business
and keep my integrity
in view and use it as I see fit?
Only on the condition
that I love him selflessly,
agree with him blindly.
Why?
Because, he replies
he hates hypocrisy.
Oh so do I
but aren't we all guilty?

He humbly admits
he has a particular clarity
which enables him
to make sound judgments.
I on the other hand
have led a complex existence
which means I am a poor decision maker.
What a shame, I say.

As I navigate the splendour
of diverse self-knowledge,
the network of relationships
where facts are embedded
and contextualized,
he tells me intellectualism
is the anchor of the world.

Extreme relativism is bosh
and the escape of those
who cannot face real,
tangible evidence of truth -
he knows this all too well.

If only the world would listen
and become enlightened like him.
Can you explain, I ask.
He shakes his head, exasperated
and tells me
If I research the pages of
his accumulated knowledge,
instead of writing poetry
creating a false existence,
then I might,
just might,
understand.

everyadventure
02-12-2011, 10:43 AM
Delta: wow. I've always been astounded by your range (you can write about anything!), but I think this piece is my favorite.

"Only on the condition / that I love him selflessly" You managed to capture the entire dynamic of this relationship in just a few words.

"As I navigate..." This stanza was so well done! You summed up the contrasting attitudes in such a clear, tight manner.

"He humbly admits..." Oh, I can just SEE his expression.

In any case, if you're "one of them" I'm glad of it, because you wouldn't produce such fantastic poetry otherwise.

PrinceMyshkin
02-12-2011, 10:47 AM
For me, the repeated "might" bracketed by the tactical line breaks, sums the dude up in a nutshell! Well done...

Delta40
02-12-2011, 05:15 PM
Thank you both. Just needed to get all that meaningless stuff that leads absolutely nowhere between me and my brother out so I don't get swallowed up by it!

Jerrybaldy
02-12-2011, 09:02 PM
It felt personal and heartfelt. Maybe you should send it to him and expose your thoughts to its target?