misadventure

[Jerrybaldy]

Misadventure suggested i should lighten up .
here goes.

Jelly babies
the black babies
have the
extra jelly.
Jesus Christ
let my christmas list
make it
up that chimney first.
Here comes the sun
lennon/mcartney
like ringo
gives a flying
f uck.
Misadventure
slightly distracted
siren stepford wife
best of luck.

[Delta40]

I don't know Jerry. It sounds to me that you're still 'aving a go' but I like in your face poetry. You're a liquorice allsort to me!

[Haunted]

ah huh

[everyadventure]

I've read this through three times and can't make heads or tails of it...

anybody care to tackle this one?

[hillwalker]

Apart from the fact that 'Here Comes the Sun' was actually written by George Harrison, I'm not sure what's driving this along. It seems to be an attempt to clamber onto a soap box and indeed 'have a go' at a number of urban myths/cultural icons.

I'm not suggesting everyadventure has achieved that status just yet even amongst her fans on LitNet. But the 'siren stepford wife' phrase is wickedly interesting..... perhaps Jerry's suggesting she should 'darken up'.

H

[YesNo]

I've read this through three times and can't make heads or tails of it...

For what it's worth, I don't understand it either.

[Haunted]

ok, I'll expand on my ah huh. I see a clever double entendre:

1) misadventure = Miss Adventure
2) misadventure (literally) of a certain nature (clues abound) is heading in the way of a housewife from a quaint neighborhood (like the movie Stepford Wife) singing a seductive yet dangerous siren song (like the name of a poem posted here)

close but no cigar? (no pun intended)

[everyadventure]

This is a seriously strange place.

[PrinceMyshkin]

This is a seriously strange place.


Best not to judge the zoo by any particular one of its inmates.

[Haunted]

Best not to judge the zoo by any particular one of its inmates.

there's monkey business going on?

[JuniperWoolf]

For what it's worth, I don't understand it either.

Thirded.

[Jerrybaldy]

ah ok. I have recently given up smoking and on wednesday evening I had the idea that whisky burnt the back of your mouth a bit like a smoke so I went and bought a bottle. I have no recollection of writing this or c*nt as a result. Haunted is right though in so far as misadventure is miss adventure is everyadventure so well done haunted. The rest of you are also right that this makes no sense.
afterthebirth was previous to this and I stand by that one :)
thanks friends
Jerry

[everyadventure]

I finally have a poem written about me, and THIS is what I get? Could have done without it, thanks.

[Jerrybaldy]

hey you didnt understand it anyways chillax

[Haunted]

Haunted is right...so well done haunted

When was I ever right about anything?! Thank you for the recognition sir.



I had the idea that whisky burnt the back of your mouth a bit like a smoke so I went and bought a bottle. I have no recollection of writing this

More power to the unconscious. Pass that bottle Jer.