to get here, but without that last e

[injunuity]

hey folks, please ..
analyze, criticize, interpret, comment, appraize, assess, review, evaluate, suggest, scrutenize, compliment, examine, compare, comment, anything.

tell me what you think.
thanks in advance for any insite or opinions.

here is something i wrote & titled.



to get here, but without that last e.


whether i'm tied up
or tied down
i try to look anywhere but the ground
& even the sky only tells me the weather
but who needs all the answers
when we're all tied up in this together.

[PrinceMyshkin]

It's a great frolic but feels as if there was/could have been a lot more to say. Your control throughout is relaxed and effective.