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Delta40
01-27-2011, 05:29 PM
Another business trip
goes off the rails.
His expenses
are strictly cash only.
In her, out of her
His small ego grows
as the bedhead knocks
louder and faster
with each thrust
against the paper thin wall.
His briefcase topples
off the sidetable where
falsehood is strewn across
the moth worn carpet.
In this seedy hotel room
his violent need
sprouts,
flourishes
into something more
forceful
than his nagging wife.

yuka
01-28-2011, 11:09 AM
Delta, I just curious, what's the next?
between he, and his wife :)
a kind of lifestyle of some of nowaday's people

Haunted
01-28-2011, 12:10 PM
starting as subtle and suggestive and progressing to full-blown (no pun intended), this so skillfully exposes the heart of the matter — the nagging wife, bringing empathy to the cheater. Totally believable and a great read.

Delta40
01-28-2011, 09:22 PM
Yuka - I'm not sure what you're asking but you're right that it is a lifestyle for many people.

Haunted - You seem to understand so much of what I write!