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kittypaws
01-26-2011, 09:46 PM
There is a hush
Of silence
As the flakes fall.
That shushing noise
That fills your ears
As the winds wisp by.

There is a sense
Of comfort
Peace
Relaxation
Revelation.

All upon a snowy night.

Kittypaws

everyadventure
01-26-2011, 11:24 PM
"Revelation" was the perfect word choice. Well done.

hillwalker
01-27-2011, 05:00 PM
One of your best, kitty * * * *

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kittypaws
01-27-2011, 09:59 PM
thank you both!

simple and pure just like the driven snow.

Kittypaws

aliengirl
01-28-2011, 03:40 AM
Simple but elegant. The words you chose create a sense of peaceful silence, very soothing indeed.

yuka
01-28-2011, 10:43 AM
outside, my place, is a snowy and rainy night

a comfortable reading. thanks for sharing