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Delta40
01-26-2011, 06:14 PM
Wisdom may be
the darkest of veils
crouched behind
the tree of knowledge,
ready to snatch
any passer-by.
Pounce!
Another body is dragged along
the rotting vegetation
of their life
and placed under the shade
of the tree to reflect.
Better to come by wisdom
through untold suffering
than to stay out of the wood
in blind ignorance

Sionn Harrow
01-26-2011, 06:43 PM
That's an impressive piece of poetry-- your last line really left me going "wow." Normally I'd offer some critique...but your work appears to be flawless;) Keep it up.

PrinceMyshkin
01-26-2011, 06:48 PM
Those final four lines are tough to swallow and appear to be the distillation of painful experience!

Jerrybaldy
01-26-2011, 08:05 PM
reminds me of an old mate adage of its better to regret the things you do...... Loved the dramatics of pounce! :) Made me smile and think of Enid. Long Live Delta x

Delta40
01-28-2011, 09:29 PM
Thank you all. I have been self-absorbed these past weeks and have not applied myself to the wonderful contributions of others, for which I apologise.