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Patrick_Bateman
01-23-2011, 04:21 PM
Purists will hate them as they don't strictly follow the Japanese tradition but nuts to them :)


Haiku I

On a tranquil mind,
Twilight descends with deathly howl
A kind soul vacates.

Haiku II

Corrupt souls banished,
To be haunted by demons.
Beyond salvation.


Haiku III

The cold Winter snaps.
Warmth in the arms of her love,
Melts the ice glazed heart.


Haiku IV (for Lynx)

Flames repose in ashes.
Like the mythical phoenix,
A life is reborn.

Delta40
01-23-2011, 05:33 PM
Haiku is an art
That few can write very well
This is a good try

Patrick_Bateman
01-23-2011, 06:49 PM
Haiku is an art
That few can write very well
This is a good try


What an exquisite way to praise :)

as a side note
IV was written for a friend who was recently diagnosed with cancer of the blood.