Animal Farm (my take on it)

[zoolane]

Animal Farm.

The days when by quite fast on the ‘Farm’ for the four legs creatures, with windmill to build but with ‘Snowball’ to blame for downfall. With very animal does in bit to improve is life in future and for other generations to come. Napoleon is watch from it to far way, and stands tall on his hind legs. Stroke the pack of dogs with pipe stick out of his mouth and wear Jones dress gown as has just depart from bed with sheets. With Squealer knock. “Sir, breakfast is ready?”
"Yes, Squealer I come and tell the head pig to get peasants to work harder”. Squealer ran fast as he could, and make sure he’s on all four legs.

Back in kitchen, Napoleon now it suit and boot to having meet with fellow pigs about next step. That head of table he sit with his dogs at his side. All know that they are scared of be expelled like Snowball or been bite by the sharp tooth on four leg creature to only exist outside the Pigs house. With tea by serve youth of party, and other take short hand in corner of room. Napoleon stand bang small hammer on mat so not mark table, and bring the meeting is one word for in I suppose.

“First thing is food for sale, how much and cost?” While these words slither from his mouth, he is careful watches all members for a hint of rebellion.
“I said that we ration the four legs animals more to limit of what just about need to work on the windmill”
“But sir, that like you erm ,sorry I mean the party are starve them to death”. One pig utter on far left.

Napoleon stood with Sabra creature get ready to launch attack, march to the top of room “Does anyone else agree with him? If so I suggest you leave now or be quiet” Napoleon says in aloud and stern voice.

The alone pig hang his head in shame and leave well-being escort out a point mutt. We shall carry on with meeting. It when on for hour well Napoleon outline what is going happened without being question again. Later that evening two of low member of the party, when out in the garden for some air due the air in the house was stale. One of them notices small white material of floor but with close look it was ear from little one pig. Both pigs knew for sure the intention of their so called leader.

[Jack of Hearts]

This reader does not necessarily enjoy Orwell or the tired dialogue his work seems to inspire- but he has an interest in reading zoo's work, so he read this.

You are doing very well with your English these days, zoo. This was a fine, interesting read, probably even more for someone who liked 'Animal Farm.' One thing, though:


Napoleon stood with Sabra creature get ready to launch attack, march to the top of room “Does anyone else agree with him? If so I suggest you leave now or be quiet” Napoleon says in aloud and stern voice.

In the book the hostility is more subtle, more insidious. Maybe you were going for the opposite?





J

[zoolane]

This reader does not necessarily enjoy Orwell or the tired dialogue his work seems to inspire- but he has an interest in reading zoo's work, so he read this.

You are doing very well with your English these days, zoo. This was a fine, interesting read, probably even more for someone who liked 'Animal Farm.' One thing, though:



In the book the hostility is more subtle, more insidious. Maybe you were going for the opposite?



J



Hi Jack,
Thank you for comment. I was recommand by my teacher and they though enjoy the book and to be honest I am. My favourite bit end chapter 5 with Orwell writes.
" This said Squealer, was something called tactis. He repeated a number of times, 'Tactis, comdrades, tactis!' skipping round and whiking his tail with a merry laugh."

I have only readed up to chapter six at moment, even only short novel it one where should be reading slowish pace.

I was trying to show in own little way that 'Napolean' can be character that is slight more aggressive than in privately and the book.

Zoo

[hillwalker]

Glad you are enjoying reading the book, zoo.

One of the key elements of the book the first time you read it (and the one that is probably most fun) is identifying what the various characters are meant to represent in terms of political allegiance and how revolutionary regimes become more and more like the governments they have overthrown once they taste power for themselves.

H

[zoolane]

I total agree that Orwell intention was show it any form of people that could be throw other goverment and put their self of it with all creaming of the top of people.

I have tried readed on the russia rel but I think better if I could see some programmes when I have time.

Thank you for comment H.