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kittypaws
01-02-2011, 10:54 PM
On New Year’s Day
our streets are lined;
flickering candles
nestled in golden sand
burning in bright bags.

They bring a delight
to the essence of life.
Summoning up many
imaginings.
However,
it is what your spirit
perceives.

Sadly all that is left
in the early dawn
is a pile of sand
on your lawn.
And who you aspire
To be.

http://i801.photobucket.com/albums/yy299/kittypaws_jones/P1020028.jpg

kittypaws

Happy New Year Lit Net!!

Delta40
01-02-2011, 11:38 PM
nice pic. I particularly like the sign No Outlet! In the morning of new years day, we may feel that way!

firefangled
01-03-2011, 04:43 AM
Wonderful perception and poem. Love the dark sepia of the photo. yes, and the "No Outlet" sign. Shades of Sartre.

I would exchange the semicolon after "lined" and use "with" to begin L3.