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robertenem
12-29-2010, 01:03 AM
New generation
long lost
heartbreakers
heartaches
urban acres
broken lovers
love lost
once; never
only fakers
now forever
flying daggers
digging deep
digging deeper
carving anger
anger raging
foul and bitter
soft touch
violent hitter
now forever
broken lovers
urban acres
heartaches
heartbreakers
long lost
lost the beat

Originally posted here (http://robertenem.wordpress.com/2010/12/20/lost-the-beat/)

Delta40
12-29-2010, 06:58 AM
I am sure there is a term for this type of poetry. You take key words and associate them and let the verse metamorphose before your very eyes as images and feelings are conveyed through the transposition of the term over and over again.

I like it!

robertenem
12-30-2010, 01:17 AM
I am sure there is a term for this type of poetry. You take key words and associate them and let the verse metamorphose before your very eyes as images and feelings are conveyed through the transposition of the term over and over again.

I like it!

Thank you!