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hack
12-24-2010, 04:41 PM
a stifled sob
a sleet wet dog
a sprig of wilted green

an unused smile
an untied bow
an empty house between

PrinceMyshkin
12-24-2010, 04:58 PM
"So much depends upon" the things that appear to be omitted here, or implied without being made overt. What a sad, sad, moving poem!

Hawkman
12-25-2010, 05:38 AM
One can only marvel at the elegant simplicity which implies so much. Best wishes - H

YesNo
12-25-2010, 09:10 AM
I liked the second stanza best, especially "unused smile". Nice meter and rhyme.

Bar22do
12-25-2010, 06:39 PM
This is quietly tearing, hack... your mastery is now an established fact, though you continue to to surprise!
A good New Year to you,
Bar