the slightly surreal might appeal

[Sampson]

i call them like i see them
if my freedom is questioned
but the rest of the time
i ask questions seek depth
and look form all perceptions
every concept has many
dimensions but if you choose
to venture to the centre
in relentless pensive sessions
then you will find that
there are many assets to having
a multi-faceted imagination
whether you're up late pacing
the hall looking for more
than an answer or making calls
to deities which you perceive
to be prayers or you're laying
awake trying escape a factual
landscape which you've come
to consider fake if you take
a moment to imagine
the maddest things that you've
seen happen and examine
them from numerous angles
and tangle the wires of time
to see whether the outcome
changes and remain patient
then you'll find that you're
multi-faceted imagination
has taken you place which
is more than sense data and
names and faces this place
which transcends the offensive
and enthralls the senses
a place where a penchant for
the slightly surreal might appeal
while you watch the wheels of
time appear and turn in your mind

[mpdague]

I like the idea and concept of your piece, perception and imagination fuel the human writing experience, but the run on stanza does not sit well with eye nor brain.


M

[Big Dante]

I like the idea and concept of your piece, perception and imagination fuel the human writing experience, but the run on stanza does not sit well with eye nor brain.


M

I agree, I liked the writing but it was hard to read without pause.