Eyes

[Jerrybaldy]

My love for you
explodes in the red
of the veins
that appear in my eyes.
Those whites
washed away
in the blood
that leaks out
and each iris
an island
for you.

[Maryd.]

Stop it Jerry.... Another short one, but fantastic... Love "Each iris and island of you" keep them coming. :)

[Delta40]

you woo all women lit-netters with a single stroke of your hand Jerry!

[Jerrybaldy]

Well, a good two :D

[Haunted]

So uniquely romantic, the poem and those red green eyes.

[weltanschauung]

hmmmm