Sexy poem

[Jerrybaldy]

I am yet to meet
a solitary soul
who failed
to reveal,
just who they are
unhidden, behind
open eyes.

[YesNo]

Yes, I think you're right. We all reveal ourselves through our eyes. We can't help it, but it is rare, I think, for most of us to look patiently enough at someone else to see anything there at all except what we want to see.

[hillwalker]

Profound little piece - and yes, the eyes never lie (unless he/she happens to be wearing shades).

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[firefangled]

Very true. An open poem about those open eyes.

[PrinceMyshkin]

Lovely poem but do get rid of most of the commas.

[Haunted]

Sexy indeed, when what you can see in someone's eyes makes them so so naked to you.

[Delta40]

A solitary soul - perhaps their eyes mirror the unhidden in us all.