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hoope
12-10-2010, 02:18 AM
I tried to smile,
but nothing seemed so happy
I tried to stand up
but I kept falling over and over again
I tried to move on
but there was no motive.
And as much as I tried
nothing came true.


Here ,I am surrounded by people
Yet am not with them .
Here I am talking to them
but no one understands me
Here I am sitting alone
and singing A New Day Has Come


For all those times
that i have tried so hard
for all those times
that i tried to change things
For all those times
that I never found Me
I wished if all went right
I just wished it deeply ...


Hoope

Maryd.
12-10-2010, 06:54 AM
Oh my love... I felt this one. So deep. :(
I hate to say I know, but I do. Well done dear.
xo

PrinceMyshkin
12-10-2010, 08:22 AM
I hope that speaking your mind so candidly will free up some space for something new and good to happen to you.

hoope
12-10-2010, 08:32 AM
Thx Mary for ur comment....
Its just a random thoughts & no one ever knows where the truth lies....

Prince ! It does relieve sometimes especially when u can't talk about it ..
Thx for stepping by.

Maryd.
12-10-2010, 08:39 AM
Thx Mary for ur comment....
Its just a random thoughts & no one ever knows where the truth lies....

Ha! I do believe you. Or do I. Hahaha

Haunted
12-10-2010, 02:01 PM
A tidy poem and the end opens up to hope, and that's what you are, Hoope.

hoope
12-11-2010, 10:46 AM
Ha! I do believe you. Or do I. Hahaha
We have to believe it .. even if its not :)


A tidy poem and the end opens up to hope, and that's what you are, Hoope.

Haunted dear ! Thank you .. so i guess its always Hope .