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infamous JT
12-08-2010, 07:43 AM
Do you see me?
I am sitting in a prison cell
Do you see me?
here I sit, in a nightmare worse than hell
I’ve lived my life just like you
I loved my friends and my family too
I tried to care for those around me
I did my best to conform to society

Friends say I was simply in the wrong place
Others claim that I’m a disgrace
Depending on your point of view
And what reasonable doubt means to you
I swear to god there was another
But of course that doesn’t matter
Words spoken from a criminal’s mouth
Are nothing more than a whisper in a crowd
The priest is here, its time to go
What happens after you die? I need to know

Maximilianus
12-15-2010, 12:51 AM
It's a touching poem, though it would attract more attention if you post it in the Personal Poetry section. People here visit that section more regularly. Welcome to Lit Net, by the way :)

Varenne Rodin
12-15-2010, 04:15 AM
My brother died in prison. I don't know what quality of human he was, but he was my brother, so he was good for me.

Nice poem.