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cogs
12-05-2010, 08:19 PM
sonorous rhymes
whose advent is onerous
may cause ya
to feel nausea
and throw up an opus

hillwalker
12-06-2010, 07:24 AM
Forced rhyme (very original admittedly) - throwaway at best because much of the sense is lost beneath the attempt at cleverness.

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cogs
12-06-2010, 03:15 PM
that's the point my poem, leave out the forced rhymes and cleverly throw them away. (but were you really telling me the poem's a throwaway?)