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Legend
12-05-2010, 07:23 PM
don't get me wrong ..I really love
I don't wanna be small in life
the life so strange, who is care
what happen to night
seem things so simple
u should believe ..don't far away
I'm hear a song , I try to sing
without any thing ..wish is suddenly come
I don't want check out before

why u let me go

some time I'm bad, I wasn't ignored
I feel nervous ,I'm wasn't silly
I'm trying to don't lose my world
I'm ask u...r u have dreams ..?
I well to believe ..any thing happen with me

why u let me go
I like u , u like me
what change now
I like u , u like me

hey ..tell me what doing now
I'm not saying good bey
only tonight to we enjoy
And then everyone goes

why u let me go
I like u , u like me
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cogs
12-06-2010, 12:41 AM
i like the subject of your poem.
Legend
12-07-2010, 09:24 PM
i like the subject of your poem.

oh thank u :wave:
Delta40
12-09-2010, 09:20 AM
Your poem has a song like quality to it. I am not sure if English is your first language but some of the short semi-formed sentences are fine while others are a little awkward.

why u let me go is definitely smooth
I well to believe ..any thing happen with me could do with some tightening up.

well done
Maryd.
12-26-2010, 09:00 AM
Glad to see your poetry up... :)
Lovely work.
:)
Legend
12-26-2010, 09:24 AM
Your poem has a song like quality to it. I am not sure if English is your first language but some of the short semi-formed sentences are fine while others are a little awkward.

why u let me go is definitely smooth
I well to believe ..any thing happen with me could do with some tightening up.

well done

umm
maybe I made poem like a Lyrical poem
because I like it :blush:
like any song ..?
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yeah my English language not first ..but i trying to be

thank u for comment
Legend
12-26-2010, 09:28 AM
Glad to see your poetry up... :)
Lovely work.
:)

and I am very happy to see your comment
, Merry Christmas:blush:
yuka
12-26-2010, 12:15 PM
yes, agreed. this poem has a songlike quality.

happy new year Legend
Legend
12-29-2010, 07:20 PM
yes, agreed. this poem has a songlike quality.

happy new year Legend


I swear I did not steal any words:yikes:
like what..?!
happy new year toooo:hat:
AlfredtheGreat
12-31-2010, 11:01 AM
"Ohh, here go hell come"
Legend
12-31-2010, 04:46 PM
"Ohh, here go hell come"

what :smilielol5:
PrinceMyshkin
12-31-2010, 05:13 PM
what :smilielol5:

Would you please explain to me and anyone else who might be interested what's going on here? Did someone accuse you of plagiarism? If so, where was that accusation made and who made it?
Legend
12-31-2010, 05:34 PM
Would you please explain to me and anyone else who might be interested what's going on here? Did someone accuse you of plagiarism? If so, where was that accusation made and who made it?


I don't know what happen :boxing_smiley: