Speak French To Me?

[Gizlam]

I'll be the first to admit i dont actually speak french! All french in this poem can be blamed on my boyfriend who helped and actually takes french as a subject. :)

Bonne nuit Sir.
Speak French to me
whisper Softly au contraire
Just to me just to please.
the language of amour
becomes a code
of dancers, berets
garlic cloves.
Hold me close just to say,
Je serai poète et toi poésie,
and I will be forever yours
For you’re the one J’adore.

Speak French to me?

All critcism welcome grammar especially! My Weakness haha

[Hawkman]

This is really good fun to read. Thoroughly enjoyed it. H

ps, I'd suggest putting a comma in L4 after me

[firefangled]

Makes me want to respond in French, but, nous regrettons, I cannot. Thankfully the humor in this piece survives my lack of élégance.

Very enjoyable.

[hillwalker]

This has a certain je ne sais quoi...

but I'm not sure what. Great fun.

H

[Gizlam]

Thankyou :)

It always pleases me when people enjoy my poetry and call it fun. Also thanks for the advise on the comma now reading through I can see a few places it needs tweaking (capital letters hate me it seems)

Tar again :D

[yuka]

i hope i can speak French to you. but not now. hehe
i'll take it for my subject, some day.