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[yuka]

For you still I fail to find a name
Incapable of arranging a place
Once I tried to describe your form
With the help of those immortal gods

And you the mysterious messenger
Why always holding your head high
Even without showing your sneer
Wearing an unfathomable face forever

[PrinceMyshkin]

I admire the restrained, enigmatic way you describe this enigmatic character.

[hillwalker]

I took this to be a poem addressing your poem - which is untitled.

The opening line suggests you are frustrated that these lines appeared in your imagination without the good manners to bring along the poem's title.

But maybe I am mistaken and it refers to a particular individual. No matter - a thought-provoking piece.

H

[yuka]

I admire the restrained, enigmatic way you describe this enigmatic character.

thank you Prince, for your words. :)


I took this to be a poem addressing your poem - which is untitled.

The opening line suggests you are frustrated that these lines appeared in your imagination without the good manners to bring along the poem's title.

But maybe I am mistaken and it refers to a particular individual. No matter - a thought-provoking piece.

H

smart hill, :)you are very close!
i once thought some philosophical problems, hope got some breakthrough but failed finally . and then came out these lines. originally i had a title in chinese, but when i translated it found no match english word, then left it untitle

[blank|verse]

Yes, 'enigmatic' is a very fitting adjective, Prince!

It's nicely written and restrained, yuka, but perhaps a touch too enigmatic as I'm left feeling more puzzled than enlightened.

[yuka]

Yes, 'enigmatic' is a very fitting adjective, Prince!

It's nicely written and restrained, yuka, but perhaps a touch too enigmatic as I'm left feeling more puzzled than enlightened.

yes BV, these lines a little bit enigmatic, maybe thats because i was locking into puzzlement while working on them.

[Delta40]

You strongly conveyed the facelessness aspect while still revealing their effect upon you.

[yuka]

You strongly conveyed the facelessness aspect while still revealing their effect upon you.

thank you Delta, for you read and words
thats an impressing thought process

[Earl Grey]

To be visited by a visiting messenger that sneers at me would be most unpleasant. Perhaps the reason that he sneers is that he believes that he is above us all and only he can understand the entity`s existance. An interesting entry.

[firefangled]

I like this very much and I hesitate to try and unravel its mystery.

When I read this, it seems like you are speaking of eternity and the messenger is death.

However, I am totally prepared to not accept that and just enjoy this as a poem that elicits more than a few thoughts in me.

Well done, Yuka.

[mpdague]

Your words evoke the vastness of the stars and the enigma of time for me. I appreciate the journey.

[yuka]

Earl, thank your for your read and comment. welcome to Litnet .

Firefangled, thank your for your read and praise

Mpdague, thank you for your read and comment